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November 17, 2007
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rope

by *FoggyPebble

I planted something and made rope from it
When this very first began;
I tied it twice around my waist.
Growing heavier than myself, it's the only thing affective
For when I stray too far away;
The stripped branch doesn't even bend with it.
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10,7,8,16,8,10

I got distracted in the middle of writing a poem...and this was the only finished section of it. I guess I didn't know emough about the subject to finish. ..Meh, might scrap.

"It seems I'm nothing more than a puppet to you, my skin..."

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:iconseaofthoughts:
I'm sure I don't understand the meaning as you see it, But the beauty of poetry is that the reader may understand in relation to his/her own life. That is one thing I like about this poem. It is using the metaphor of the rope and still being very...abstract I guess. Basically leaving room for various interpretations. One way I see it is that this rope is a form of security. It's what you (or the person in the poem) does to feel safe and maintain a sense of balance. It is the only thing that resists you from straying too far from what's real.
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You understand it! ..The rope's kinda my conscience, but I wanted it to be vague..for what you said

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I'm a fan of this piece. Very well written.
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Thank you^^ It's personal; wasn't sure if it made as much sense to others ..What do you like about it?

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I don't like being thanked for :+fav:s. It's enough you've shown me what I liked.
Calling OP homosexual as an insult won't help you win internet arguments.
Thanks to ppl like YOU, docs and other ppl think our disorder makes ME an ass.
#theHEALTHYrange
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