This piece is very expressive in feelings of isolation, I believe. Not exactly an uncomfortable loneliness but the notion that everyone around is always oblivious, assuming to others; and that it is a repetitive, sickening progress which grows old and starts to unknowingly wither away at it's victim. It continues until they feel prematurely decrepit by an overwhelmingly expansive humble, bitter wisdom. And, of course, it deals with certain things along the terms of Bipolar disorder and possibly manic depression, as hinted.

I apologize if I did not understand which message you were trying to convey in this poetic writing. I am merely perceiving it through my perspective, and I find it very thought-inspiring, as good food for the brain, wholly complimenting. One would have to read it numerous times to fully understand it, but this is not a bad thing at all. It is powerful, emboldened, capturing. The reader could find a standing out mental suggestion the first time reading it, and even more the next.

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"Be kind to unkind people. They probably need it the most." - Unknown

You got it! ..That other stuff I really relate to and am impressed with myself/or you that you managed to get into my head like that.
Thank you so much for those encouraging words; you're really good at critiquing writing!

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Ya know what gets under my skin? Thank-yous for s.I mean, what's the point? If Iyour stuff,it's enough showing me what I liked.You don't clutter my page&I won't yours;deal?
~ProtectshippingYGO Baku+Tris

You're very welcome. My thanks in turn for your being so appreciative to it.

I look forward to getting around to reading the other pieces you've constructed in time.

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"Be kind to unkind people. They probably need it the most." - Unknown